Currently un-named

[Karl Trizin]

Civil War of sorts
Dastardly tactics arise
Assassination

Friendship plays no role
for in this internal bout
no holds are barred

Time will move forward
Life has it's own set course
Somethings don't happen

Indecisiveness
The great beast has arisen
How long will it last?

[Karl Trizin]

If you could try to suggest a name for it, I'd appreciate it. I think about every name.

I wrote this about 2 weeks ago, on the 2nd of July.

[Payrune]

Awesome. And I still think The Great Beast would be good for the title, seeing as how that's what the poem talks about rising and all.

[Shinobi-Iri (nick)]

I would have said 'Political Unrest' but I guess that takes some of the speculation out of it.

Anyway, nice work buddy...the world needs more poetry.

[stobsy]

Nice write Karl, free rhyme rules!

[Karl Trizin]

Actually, it was written as Haiku. I asked Rune to move it, but I think he may have though I was talking about the one that was titled Haiku. xP

Regardless, could it be moved now?

[stobsy]

karltrizin said:

Actually, it was written as Haiku.

Personally haiku doesn't do much for me, it just seems like several random sentences hapharzardly arranged together. But maybe I'm blissfully ignorant of the deeper meaning behind the nonsensical words.

[Shinobi-Iri (nick)]

Well, I wouldn't call Haiku all nonsensical words. I mean, most Haiku might seem weird to us because it's probably been translated from Japanese to English a thousand times and the translator has messed up with the language rules and whatnot. But I find Haiku written by somebody that speaks good English is always the best, because it makes sense, right?

[madkill]

haiku is only 3 sentences this isn't haiku