BD Revamped: Chapter 1

[Payrune]

...or most of it, anyway. Here's the first 40 or so pages I've done thus far, but it's going to be much longer (at least 50 more pages). Just thought I'd get some early criticism to keep me going. Oh yeah, and there might be a cover page, but I haven't decided whether or not to do one. Title page seems sufficient enough for some quick info, but sometimes audiences need a big attractive cover page to grasp their attention...

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Yeah...starts on page 2...so you gotta go backwards from there. JIC you were confused.

[Shinobi-Iri (nick)]

I'll get down to reading it soon man, I had a quick glance over some of the pages though and they're looking good.