A/M-Day

[madkill]

Today’s a dark day
For the children that cry,
Searching their families
“No birds in this sky”

Days are nights,
For the government you see,
Those ones that have ‘their’
Fam-il-ly

But know this you,
The ‘saviours’ in blue,
Our lives are not determined
By what you folks do

Nobody cares
What happens to you,
Even if you are
Just doing what you do,

For this simple reason,
From the child that loves you,
“Lose Love, Have Hope and
Keep clear as a spear”

...
Then one day,
You all eventually,
Be here

[Shinobi-Iri (nick)]

Interesting poem, I like the way it was set out. Your choice of language was interesting also, and I'm still not quite sure what I think of it. Nevertheless, reading it was quite fun.

[madkill]

thanks ^^;