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Post by Shinobi-Iri (nick) on Jun 19, 2008 7:14:42 GMT -5
Everything is nothing in this world... No cars, no streets...no people
The sun that shines overhead is nothing to me... But a ball of gas that will soon burn out,
I try to be literal, and rational... But I guess I just don't know how to be...
If you weren't sure what was alive and what was dead, You'd be a pessimist too...
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Post by madkill on Jun 22, 2008 22:09:30 GMT -5
not...the best, or that close...nice attempt. ^^;
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Post by Shinobi-Iri (nick) on Jun 23, 2008 1:08:45 GMT -5
Depends what sort of poetry you're into I guess. I'm not the best poet but I didn't think it was that bad.
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Post by Payrune on Jun 23, 2008 4:45:04 GMT -5
Kind of emo...
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Post by Shinobi-Iri (nick) on Jun 23, 2008 8:12:48 GMT -5
I should call it emo anthem...
By the way, I wouldn't take it literally...it's bound to be a metaphor for something.
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Post by madkill on Jun 23, 2008 9:29:13 GMT -5
its not bad, its just on the line of good/bad / <-- that line but still..
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