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Post by madkill on May 11, 2008 20:40:04 GMT -5
slicing her eyes piercing her skin, I know what I do is a moral sin
cutting through the veins painting shades of red, sleeping with my eyes open
time tick-tocketing away nothing is saved for another day, I think it's Sunday
throwing the toy away soon to grab another, I must go to church now with mother
butchering another's mind into destroying it's being, makes them lose faith...even in praying
taking control then breaking the strings, these are just a few of my favourite things!..
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Post by Payrune on May 15, 2008 13:37:41 GMT -5
Cool. This reminds me of Rob Zombie's "Superbeast".
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Post by madkill on May 27, 2008 9:09:55 GMT -5
oh-kay..guessing thats good I did enjoy Devil's Rejects
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Post by Payrune on May 28, 2008 1:00:57 GMT -5
Yeah, it was a good movie. Pretty sick though, like most of Z's works.
Also, now that I think about it, this also reminds me of his song Living Dead Girl.
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Post by Shinobi-Iri (nick) on Jun 1, 2008 8:59:51 GMT -5
Hmm, very interesting poem. Morality is a good topic, and it comes into play with so many things that we do today that it's sometimes hard to tell the difference. What's classified as a 'sin' though, now that's a different story.
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Post by madkill on Jun 1, 2008 19:21:09 GMT -5
That is a true factor. Thanks for the interesting comments and the appeal this poem is getting ^^ so to speak.
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